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The value of a second.I have to bleed.  I must believe.  Dripping wet from  My emotion.   
All alone, I take you as one.  Though I feel that you have begun,  The ships have sailed out of port.  They leave you now at the ocean.   
Like a fading ghost  I decrease the most.  My chances will begin to fade  As I hoplessly wait for you   
The clock nervously ticks on.  I cannot accept you're finally gone.  One god forsaken second too late.  There is nothing I can do. The value of a second.
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UntitledAfter the solistice,  Above the evening,  Against the gilded crown,  Here lies everything.   
I cannot see the open way  Over the path; brighter than the day.  Against the cold shadows of my soul,  Here the corpse lies ever more.   
Six feet under this cold ground  Flowers bloom. My eyes open  To swallow the clay and rotting wood  Victim of my original sin.   
So on my verses on mine,  Cry not for the death of a line.  It lived only to paint a scene,  On the canvas of our dreams. Untitled
by ~sundanceloki
RecordsAsphalt grates beneath her knees  There is no one left to please  Alll or nothing left to go  Will show me what you know   
After all, when you fall, You'll be the one to show them all.   
Records ageing in the dark  Forgets words when we part  Like you are when you see  There's nothing left of me   
She screams. "I'm alive, and I love myself,  Damn you all, My words are not for sale!"T  There is nothing to destroy you now  You are safe inside but I don't see how.   
Records skipping every turn  I try but still get burned  Like theres no lie believe Records
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Poison AppleGreen placid eyes always hide  The only truths are belied  fallen leaves crinkle and dry  Cracked voice, tearless eye, I cry  Candy poison green lashes  flutter seeing my ashes  Stained by talk of old legends  This confusion never ends  Dripping with alum sweetness  All alone I have witnessed  What blessed acts I have done  And now I can be alone  In the halls dusty and cold  Where lost souls are bought and sold  angst against the will to be  Blinded by love  
I forever see Poison Apple
by ~sundanceloki
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Whats new with SDL?

Wed Apr 21, 2004, 8:09 PM
Well I'm back again after a short hiatus. I plan on submitting some work soon. Feel frre to read, digest what you will, and let me know what you think. Constructive critisism is always welcome.


The new site should be up soon. I plan to add a little more content here and there. I will try to keep you updated.

Until next we speak, Blessings

Sundance
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  • Current Residence: The fly on the wall
  • Interests: Assimilation
  • Favourite movie: World War II III
  • Favourite band or musician: Alice in the Zeppelin
  • Favourite genre of music: Any that suits me
  • Favourite artist: Dali, Monet, Raphael, Warhol,
  • Favourite poet or writer: Emerson, Thoreau, Faulkner, Weltley, Wordsworth, Keats, Saki
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  • Favourite game: The Mind
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  • Personal Quote: If you don't believe me, ask me
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~SomberTorture May 23, 2004, 6:10:46 PM
Miss ya dude... Hope you come back soon.
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~SomberTorture Apr 2, 2004, 7:48:43 PM
Your last two poems... I'm wondering if I'm thinking too hard trying to figure them out. I sorta get Poison Apple though. Have you ever written stories before? It would probably work out great, just like your poetry.
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~sundanceloki Apr 4, 2004, 1:07:38 AM
:) No need to over analyze, there really is no "correct interpretation" ( forgive the spelling, its late)" Just imagine what the words mean to you. Its perfectly ok to come up with your own ideas with any work of art. :)

I have not tried prose in a very long time. one of the main reasons is the time involved. I would love to try it again soon though.

Thanks again for the kind words, And I'll be looking forward to your next great submission :)
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~sickman Apr 30, 2004, 11:19:48 PM
mike i'm in a bad way , i don't know which way is up or down , it took me losing a friend to relize that i'm no friend , just a life form w/ agendas that have no purpose , just thoughts , and thoughts incoherant to reality , just my paranoid dillusions of grandjure , i guess , am i losing my depths on and of reality , mike i need help sober or not , i'm losin it.
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~SomberTorture Mar 27, 2004, 10:08:12 AM
Your stuff makes me think. I like that ^ ^ It's like I'm struck, but I have no idea how to describe what I'm feeling. EKG is excellent.
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~sundanceloki Mar 27, 2004, 10:19:19 AM
I appreciate the complement. Actually EKG was the most difficult for me to write.
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~SomberTorture Mar 27, 2004, 10:25:22 AM
I think I see why. When did you write it?
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~sundanceloki Mar 27, 2004, 10:28:04 AM
Around four years ago. At the time, I was going through a lot of changes.. Writing then, as it is now a way to cope.
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~RehabDJ Mar 25, 2004, 4:37:39 PM
Just stopped to say hey. "Hey"
Isa told us all to stop by. She is writing a book about all your exploits. :whisper: Might want to catch her b4 the cat is out of the bag.
Anyway, welcome. I'm a noob here to.
Take care.
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~sundanceloki Mar 25, 2004, 8:34:52 PM
Thanks for the hello, I much appreciate it !

I'm blushing at Isa's flattery, though it really should be me flattering her. Her photos are amazing!!

Its very nice to her from a fellow devaint noob we got to stick together!

Tchuss


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